lyric of crow

[machinery]

in an insignificant space
between two structures
cement & inscribed missives
breathe loss & past wars.

crimson cherries
bombard the cold soil
and dour aged leaves
get pushed by the wind,
working east to elude the
tree's fire, the opponents wage.

crows in the distance
scream out of the afternoon
like warning, like sirens,
cawing post-peace language.

clouds over hang
the busy mad silence
of these various
physical happenings
of engagement, of survival
?like old generals'
eyes, downhearted & tired.

this panorama of cosmos
bid a movement towards life,
to ease the wind, bring the
sun & put to rest
the bruising fury of opposition.

once again,
an insignificant space
will be made
&
the crows will
once again
caw?a lyric of
digging sorrow
that will never
cease.


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[Hannibal]

Loved it. Absolutely loved it.
I think because you know how I used to fancy big words, and wonderous descriptions hiding meanings. And thats what this seems to be.
I love it.
Been missin you on the boards my man. Glad to see ya postin, hope to see this trend continue.

Also, pick up Drukqs.. Aphex Twins' latest. it's kick ass... double disk.

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[Zeik Blaine]

I loved it too man....i liked how you...just the way you used your words...very intriguing. I cant explain anymore...i just liked it man...

and also pick up Shaggy's new one...its a good one!!!!

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[thrutheeyesofme]

i'm new to this forum, but i've been rooting through some of the older posts and absolutely loved this one... your whole frame and language was just so interesting... i love a bit of ambiguity and the only thing i can say is i loved this!



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